Day 14
The last of the everyday writing challenge. Let me know what you think:
Title: End
The last of the everyday writing challenge. Let me know what you think:
Title: End
It’s like a tug of war between us,
You want me to talk, spill everything,
Expect me to stay naked,
To almost discard my flesh.
Heart, blood, bones, muscles,
Exposed to you,
Thoughts, dreams, fears, tears,
Lying on the floor.
I didn’t know you then,
I don’t know you now,
But you know me, my everything,
Is this good for us, me not knowing you?
This war must end, either I stay naked,
Let the whiplash do its magic,
Or the let the silence make the decision we can't,
Whatever comes in the end, this now we have was the best.

2 comments:
"Heart, blood, bones, muscles,
Exposed to you,
Thoughts, dreams, fears, tears,
Lying on the floor." OMG! Please write more. I don't understand the end though. How does "this now we have was the best" not negate the rest of the poem?
Negate the emotions of the rest of the poem*
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