Friday, 19 September 2008

Sunday Scribblings: Invitation

Join us

her eyes met mine,
glimmering sadness echoed.
she sipped her coffee,
and slipped away slowly.
i was searching for a sign,
a sign that would assure me her smile.
she seemed too far to return,
too sad to speak.
time ticked by, slowly,
the wind gushed through her hair.
silence had become a part of the conversation,
her eyes were broken like her heart.
lost love, lost life,
my thoughts merged with hers.
as we rose to leave,
she held out her hand.
like an invitation into her world,
i put my hand in hers and invited her to mine.
we walked away into a routinal life,
with hopes of undoing this pain.
we are hopeful still,
join us..



Nita Jo said...

Such deep emotion in your writing. Very touching.

Granny Smith said...

This seems the very definition of friendship. Lovely poem.

Anonymous said...

Such a tender and emotional piece. Just lovely

Princess S/Kishmish said...

thank you all :)
i really appreciate your comments and thoughts :)

alice said...

love it, juju... poignant :)

Aki Nominal said...

A moving piece! Brilliantly done :)

Pam said...

Your poem reminds me of a woman I saw in our local coffee shop last spring. Well written.

B. Roan said...

Well written. Touching. BJ

Rambler said...

I really liked the open invitation at the end.."join us".. we all would love to

Patois said...

Oh, that really is so tender. What a lovely poem.

texasblu said...

This poem has the feeling of gentle breezes on your face - both enjoyable.

tumblewords said...

Lovely invitation!

Preethi said...

Very touching..

Birthday Invite

SweetTalkingGuy said...

What a wonderful invitation!

Veens said...

Very touching :)

Really like it.

Princess S/Kishmish said...

thank you all for stopping by! really appreciate your thoughts! :)

TD said...

Enjoyed the sad, silent feeling of the poem. Good job.

Chaggoholic.... said...

Loved the feeling of being there 4sumone in this post.Nice....

D writer said...

touching...beautiful how u write..