Join us
her eyes met mine,
glimmering sadness echoed.
she sipped her coffee,
and slipped away slowly.
i was searching for a sign,
a sign that would assure me her smile.
she seemed too far to return,
too sad to speak.
time ticked by, slowly,
the wind gushed through her hair.
silence had become a part of the conversation,
her eyes were broken like her heart.
lost love, lost life,
my thoughts merged with hers.
as we rose to leave,
she held out her hand.
like an invitation into her world,
i put my hand in hers and invited her to mine.
we walked away into a routinal life,
with hopes of undoing this pain.
we are hopeful still,
join us..
-me
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Such deep emotion in your writing. Very touching.
This seems the very definition of friendship. Lovely poem.
Such a tender and emotional piece. Just lovely
thank you all :)
i really appreciate your comments and thoughts :)
love it, juju... poignant :)
A moving piece! Brilliantly done :)
Your poem reminds me of a woman I saw in our local coffee shop last spring. Well written.
Well written. Touching. BJ
I really liked the open invitation at the end.."join us".. we all would love to
Oh, that really is so tender. What a lovely poem.
This poem has the feeling of gentle breezes on your face - both enjoyable.
Lovely invitation!
Very touching..
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What a wonderful invitation!
Very touching :)
Really like it.
thank you all for stopping by! really appreciate your thoughts! :)
Enjoyed the sad, silent feeling of the poem. Good job.
Loved the feeling of being there 4sumone in this post.Nice....
touching...beautiful ..like how u write..
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